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Editing requires a customized approach, and so does pricing it.  Before drafting a proposal, I thoroughly edit 5-10 pages with the mindset that you've already placed the project in my hands. Through tracked changes or hard-copy markings, I show you how to make your writing more dynamic without changing your meaning or voice.

Based on the edited sample and number of pages required, you will receive a written proposal that spells out your project's objective, timeline, fee and payment schedule. Once you accept the proposal, it becomes our agreementand my commitment to you.
 

 

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An Example of Kay's Ability:

 

US DECLARATION OF INDEPENDENCE

 

    Unanimously Adopted In Congress, July 4, 1776, in Philadelphia, PA

    When, in the course of human events, it becomes necessary for one people to dissolve the political bands which have connected them with another, and to assume among the powers of the earth, the separate and equal station to which the Laws of Nature and of Nature's God entitles them, a decent respect to the opinions of mankind require that they should declare causes which impel them to the separation.

    We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty, and the pursuit of Happiness. That to secure these rights. Governments are instituted among Men, deriving their just powers from the consent of the governed. That whenever any Form of Government becomes destructive of these ends, it is the Right of the People to alter or to abolish it, and to institute new Government, laying its foundation on such principles and organizing its powers in such form, as to them shall seem most likely to effect their Safety and Happiness. Prudence, indeed, will dictate that Governments long established should not be changed for light and transient causes; and accordingly all experience hath shown, that mankind are more disposed to suffer, while evils are sufferable, than to right themselves by abolishing the forms to which they are accustomed. But when a long train of abuses and usurpations, pursuing invariably the same Object evinces a design to reduce them under absolute Despotism, it is their right, it is their duty, to throw off such Government, and to provide new guards for their future security. Such has been the patient sufferance of these Colonies; and such is not the necessity which constrains them to alter their former Systems of Government. The history of the present King of Great Britain is a history of repeated injuries and usurpations, all having in direct object the establishment of an absolute Tyranny over these stales. To prove this, let Facts be submitted to a candid world.

    He has refused his Assent to Laws, the most

wholesome and necessary for the public good.

    He has forbidden his Governors to pass Laws of immediate and pressing importance, unless suspended in their operation till his Assent should be obtained; and when so suspended, he has utterly neglected to attend to them.

    He has refused to pass other Laws for the
accommodation of large districts of people, unless those people would relinquish the right of Representation in the Legislature, a right inestimable to them and formidable to tyrants only.

    He has called together legislative bodies at places unusual, uncomfortable, and distant from the depository of their public Records, for the sole purpose of fatiguing them into compliance with his measures.

    He has dissolved Representative Houses repeatedly, for opposing with manly firmness his invasion on the rights of the people.

    He has refused for a long time, after such dissolutions, to cause others to be elected; whereby the Legislative powers, incapable of Annihilation, have returned to the People at large for their exercise; the State remaining in the meantime exposed to all the dangers of invasion from without, and convulsions within.

    He has endeavored to prevent the population of these States; for that purpose obstructing the Laws for Naturalization of Foreigners; refusing to pass others to encourage their migrations hither, and raising the conditions of new Appropriations of Lands.

    He has obstructed the Administration of Justice, by refusing his Assent to laws for establishing Judiciary Powers.

    He has made Judges dependent on his Will alone, for the tenure of their offices, and the amount and payment of their salaries.

    He has erected a multitude of New Offices, and sent hither swarms of Officers to harass our people, and eat out their substance.

    He has kept among us, in times of peace. Standing Armies without the Consent of our Legislature.

    He has affected to render the Military independence of and superior to the Civil power.

    He has combined with others to subject us to a jurisdiction foreign to our constitution, and unacknowledged by our laws; giving his Assent to their Acts of pretended Legislation:

    For quartering large bodies of armed troops among us:

    For protecting them. by a mock Trial, from punishment for any Murders which they should commit on the Inhabitants of these States:

    For cutting off our Trade with all parts of the world:

    For imposing Taxes on us without our Consent:

    For depriving us in many cases of the benefits of Trial by jury:

    For transporting us beyond Seas lo be tried for pretended offenses:

    For abolishing the free System of English Laws in a neighboring Province, establishing therein an Arbitrary government, and enlarging its Boundaries so as to render it at once an example and fit instrument for introducing the same absolute rule into these Colonies:

    For taking away our Charters, abolishing our most valuable Laws, and altering fundamentally the Forms of our Government:

    For suspending our own Legislatures, and declaring themselves invested with power to legislate for us in all cases whatsoever.

    He has abdicated Government here, by declaring us out of his Protection and waging War against us.

    He has plundered our seas, ravaged our Coasts, burnt our towns, and destroyed the lives of our people.

    He is at this time transporting large Armies of foreign Mercenaries to complete the works of death, desolation and tyranny, already begun with circumstances of Cruelty and perfidy scarcely paralleled in the most barbarous ages, and totally unworthy the Head of a civilized nation.

    He has constrained our fellow-Citizens taken captive on the high Seas to bear Arms against their Country, to become the executioners of their friends and Brethren, or to fall themselves by their Hands.

    He has excited domestic insurrections amongst us, and has endeavored to bring on the inhabitants of our frontiers, the merciless Indian Savages, whose known rule of warfare, is an undistinguished destruction of all ages, sexes and conditions.

    In every stage of the Oppressions We have Petitioned for Redress in the most humble terms: Our repeated Petitions have been answered only by repeated injury. A Prince, whose character is thus marked by every act which may define a Tyrant, is unfit to be the ruler of a free people.

    Nor have we been wanting in attention to our British brethren. We have warned them from time to time of attempts by their legislature to extend an unwarrantable jurisdiction over us. We have reminded them of the circumstances of our emigration and settlement here. We have appealed to their native justice and magnanimity, and we have conjured them by the ties of our common kindred to disavow these usurpations, which would inevitable interrupt our connections and correspondence. They, too, have been deaf to the voice of justice and of consanguinity. We must, therefore, acquiesce in the necessity, which denounces our Separation, and hold them, as we hold the rest of mankind; Enemies in War, in Peace Friends.

    WE THEREFORE, the Representatives of the United States of America, in General Congress, Assembled, appealing to the Supreme Judge of the world for the rectitude of our intentions, do, in the Name, and by the authority of the good People of these Colonies, solemnly publish and declare That these United Colonies, are and of Right ought to be free and independent States; that they are Absolved from all Allegiance to the British Crown, and that all political connection between them and the State of Great Britain is and ought to be totally dissolved; and that as Free and Independent States, they have full Power to levy War, conclude Peace, contract Alliance, establish Commerce, and to do all other Acts and Things which Independent States may of right do. And for the support of this Declaration, with a firm reliance on the protection of Divine Providence, we mutually pledge to each other our Lives, our Fortunes, and our sacred Honor.

 

KAY'S VERSION

    Sometimes you have to break ties with those who taught you and strike out on your own.
    Since we believe that everyone is created equal; that a government should serve the people; that we all have the same rights, including life, liberty, happiness, and the right to institute new government when necessary for future security, we want to claim these rights and set up a new government that has a better chance of giving our people safety and happiness.
   We didn't make this decision lightly. The King of Great Britain wants to establish a tyranny over us and we can't take the suffering any longer. Here's what he's done so far:

  • Refused to ratify laws necessary for the public good

  • Forbidden us to pass our own laws

  • Refused to pass laws himself unless we would relinquish our right of representation

  • Called together our legislatures at unusual, uncomfortable, far-away places just to wear them down

  • Dissolved legislatures for opposing his invasion of rights and refused to elect others, leaving us exposed to invasion and domestic strife

  • Stopped people from coming to the States by obstructing naturalization

  • Refused to allow us to establish courts and appoint, discharge, and pay judge

  • Established new offices and sent swarms of new officers here to harass us

  • Left armies here in peacetime without our permission

  • Tried to make the military superior to civil law

  • Subjected us to people who have:

  • Quartered armed troops here

  • Protected themselves from punishment for murder

  • Cut off our trade with all parts of the world

  • Imposed taxes

  • Deprived us of trial by jury

  • Taken us to England to be tried for false offenses

  • Abolished English law in Canada and enlarged its boundaries, hoping to extend this control to us

  • Taken away our Charters, abolished our most valuable laws, and altered our government

    Furthermore, the King has declared us out of his protection and waged was against us. He has plundered our seas, ravaged our coasts, burned our towns, and killed our people. He is now sending hired armies to complete the death, desolation, and tyranny already begun. He has captured our citizens on the high seas and forced them to fight against their country, killing their friends and dying themselves. He has caused rebellion among us and has tried to turn the Indians against us.
    In every stage of these oppressions, we have petitioned for relief, to no avail. We've even appealed to the British people. We've often told them of attempts of their legislature to rule us and reminded them why we came here in the first place. We've appealed to their sense of justice and goodness, and to the ties of our common kindred. They haven't listened either.
    We must, therefore, separate from Britain and hold the British people as we hold the rest of  mankind: enemies in war, friends in peace.
    So, the Representatives of the United States of America, in the name and by authority of the people, do solemnly decree that these United Colonies are free and independent states, and that all connection with Great Britain is totally dissolved.

 

                                        

                   

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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